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Circles

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Circles

I'm in too deep
There is no retreat
My dreams repeat
I wanna take a leap
And forget the creep
But I end up in a heap
And all I do is ..... weep

I'm in too deep
There is no retreat
My dreams repeat
I wanna take a leap
And forget the creep
But I end up in a heap
And all I do is..... seep

I'm in too deep
There is no retreat
My dreams repeat
I wanna take a leap
And forget the creep
But I end up in a heap
And all I do is ...... keep


          going 
 circles      round 
             in 

◄ Nice Try ....!

The Circus ►

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Vicki Ayers

Sun 17th Jan 2016 11:03

Thank you J - that's what I was aiming for xx

J Graham

Sun 17th Jan 2016 02:06

Great poem!! Love the circular flow it has :)
The end is a great, because it doesn't actually end.

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