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the muslim's tale xiii

mid-tress she sets aside the hairbrush
doolia unveiled to the window goes
twice skips her heart to hear the horses
arrive at her father's house below

but no suitor comes - just traders -
wind-eaten men of wrinkled eyes
who sail in search of gold and rice
to break the back of ponies in a line

and always black flies come too
that feed upon the saddle sores
unkempt shaggy mares dry milked
limp on - on hooves worn to claws

seeing her tears lotvia removes her sister
leads her back to the dressing table
to pots of rouge and talc and scent
and the jewels to match the silk and sable

each passing blood moon dismay
brings more beauty to the music played
as they count the notes of sisterhood
they stave the confine of this gilded cage

promise after promise has been broken
each promised day they dress with girlish chatter
yet no man comes - just a dumb eunuch slave -
while their father and the judge grow fatter

for they alone by ancient rite
must wait a man to meet the merchant price
though each sister objects this base
as grateful women they keep their place

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Rachel Bond

Sat 6th Feb 2016 05:34

I've commented on the next part..

It is very similar to the 'lady of Shallot' in ways like that of which they are locked away and waiting for a man to come.The style is similar.

The verse concerning the broken horses is a particular wow..i wrote a poem with these lines

'...at the glacious stare of the long dead, long suffering, lacerated mare. Mating flies and festering there...gruesome horses indeed.

i think this is great writing.

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Michael Piggott

Fri 5th Feb 2016 15:54

Very nice! Really like the images and feelings it evokes of a hot far away land and expectant young women waiting for what might never come...

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