Years
Years
Stacked up
Sentinel like
A wall of defeat
On every side
Watching
Me
Microscopic me
Dictated to by giants
Running
The mouse on the wheel
No destination
A thirty year chasm is inside me
Ever famished
Its mouth is wide open
Wanting my surrender
Waiting for dominance
But......
A tiny crack has shown up
In the dam that holds back my future
Tiny
Yet significant
My vision is fixed
PeterRay
Mon 8th Feb 2016 10:44
I like the form of this poet. It reads well. I also like poems that give a sense of possibility and hope.
Best wishes,
Peter Ray