THOUGHT FORMS
A thought form leaves the restless brain
with its tiny chord into the void,
a bubble fit to bursting flies
while sensed by the love one's seeking eyes
and waiting by the chosen gate
the loved one then takes up the thought,
responds with favours deeply felt
with senses taut, deftly dealt.
A smile seals the fate of it,
the tiny chords of thoughts entwine
and pleasure presses home its claim
as the unison of thoughts inflame.
raypool
Sat 13th Feb 2016 21:56
so pleased you liked this David as it needs a calm mind to get into it. I was inspired into it by a bit of telepathy and trying to describe that, and how it might seem in a poetic context.
Cheers Ray