TOUCHDOWN
all went smoothly as our spacecraft made touchdown
the night was bleeding
distant hills etched in mystery
Gregory went first
then Maitland
and I watched them lumbering
heard the thin pleading note of voices
through the helmet
"wow, just like I thought it would be!"
"Sure is, same thought as mine!"
Mars unblinked, its channels escaping.
The colony would take time to establish.
In their spacesuits Gregory and Maitland
looked ridiculous but then
they put the flags up
the stars and the stripes
and all seemed right with the world.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Fri 4th Mar 2016 20:26
I like this. It speaks volumes in a few spiked words. IMO, very, very clever. But I may be reading things you never intended; but maybe not.