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free bird

the live version of freebird by lynyrd skynyrd is,

for me, the perfect funeral song.

it is steeped in tragedy to begin with,

since most of the band died in a plane crash

and it is jen-nys failed suicide song in forrest gump.

at my funeral the song would begin to play

and everyone would think it was mellow

and a nice tune for me to officially die to,

then as it built and built into the steam-train

juggernaut of wild fire and rock and roll excess,

with shrieking twin guitars and pin point tattoo drums

melting and boiling the very fabric of reality before

finally shuddering and quaking into a guitar solo so

high on the fretboard it causes nosebleeds

it would dawn on people that even in my death

i was trying to make people live.

will you still remember me

◄ 'Painting' - Joan Míro - 1927

i am aging like everyone else ►

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Stu Buck

Mon 7th Mar 2016 12:07

thanks all - you are right, its a fine idea. urn or coffin shaped is a must.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 7th Mar 2016 10:10

Laura's made a good point there Stu.

I think we've all got our three "Crem Songs" already lined up and this subject would make a great genre of poetry. I wonder if anyone else would care to add to the mix as it were?

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Laura Taylor

Mon 7th Mar 2016 10:00

:) My brother's best friend had this for his funeral song. Never seen so many smiling faces in a crem before. Took us all right back in the day. I was fully expecting some to stand up with their air guitars, REALLY send him out!

Damn though, what a great idea for a poem. I shall leave it a decent 6 months before pinching it ;)

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 6th Mar 2016 13:12

Love the Urn shaped text Stu!

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