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Martini Moments

Four Variations on a Single Theme


Martini Moments

 

I

Martinis make me maudlin

Eager to capitulate

To confession

Eschewing reality

In ratio to alcohol

Inversely

Deadly relaxation of

Tension

Time and

Truth

 

            II

 

A martini is the meter

Of a classic schizophrenic

Simultaneously

Laughing and weeping

Beating back

The clarion call

To  confession

 


 III

 

Martinis crack my cage

Activating covert dreams

Pressing unprotected truth

To my craven lips.

I almost cease to cringe

From the crises of confession.

How we do bash ourselves

Against the bars of our prisons

Analyzing honesty

Into a non-entity.

 

IV

 

Martinis can force words

From your throat

Disgorging them past

The triple-knotted garrote

Of discipline

To fling you treacherously

Out of yourself

Untrammeled

Unbounded

Uncontrolled

Free

 

 

Cynthia Buell Thomas

 


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Anthony Emmerson

Fri 17th Jul 2009 11:45

Hi Cynthia,
Not being a drinker - apart from the occasional glass of wine, I found these anthems to Martini and its obvious effects fascinating. Alcohol obviously loosens the tongue and the inhibitions - it's the morning after effects I dislike, leaving one both shaken AND stirred! Number IV was my favourite.
Regards
A.E.

Steve Smith

Fri 17th Jul 2009 11:39

I think you have captured the allure of that secret moment of intoxication !
Steve Smith

<Deleted User> (5646)

Wed 15th Jul 2009 23:51

Hi Cynthia,
i love the final stanza. It's so true. Unfortunately.

Janet. :-)

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 15th Jul 2009 20:55

Like this one Cynthia. Weve all had our "martini moments" at some time, when words just trip off the tongue with a life of their own!! I like the format too, and think the ending is particularly strong.
Cate xx

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