The End
The voice of hate
I've heard of late
Has sunk me down in terror
A crippled ship
I drift the depths
Of navigators error
Once bathed in light
I'm now undone
Left struggling in the dark
My memory turns
To days far gone
When the voice was of a lark
So tortured life
Now ends in strife
I gasp in vain for breath
Just left alone
Frozen to the bone
Shaking myself to death
(c)Rhumour 1974
<Deleted User> (5646)
Wed 15th Jul 2009 23:39
This strikes me as being well written.
'A crippled ship
i drift the depths
of navigators error.'
Super stanza.
Janet. :-)