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Hi Chris. How you doing, performed at at least 3 gigs with you lately but not spoke properly, must try harder. I have not commented on your postings so far as they have come in overwhelming clumps. This one is on its own however... Our work is opposite in one sense - Your poems (almost a song in this case) are strongly and skillfully deliverered (performed) quickly and rhythmically. In my case (at least with the serious ones) I like to go slowly and let the words breathe and speak for themselves, you do have cleaver, interesting and engaging choices of words but I am always playing catch up. Maybe I am just getting old? lol. I notice you only post spoken words not written ones, is this because of the reasons above? not saying either of us are right or wrong just different. Keep well. Winston.
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Chris Dawson
Tue 21st Jul 2009 15:46
Compelling as ever Chris, but watch your in- breath ... it is possible to take the breath deep down to the bottom of the lungs without the sharp inhalation sound, using your diaphragm more.
But excellent work!
Cx