WIND RISING
turning back the sheet of sky
the wind is opening its westward eye
searching for a place to live
proving its worth,
the rhythm is rising
riding high.
Fondling the naked trees
this uncontrollable wraith will tease
the curmudgeonly old and make them shiver
and scuttle away,
to be overtaken
with a moan and a cry.
A squirrel turns its wary head
on a thought that hangs like drifting thread
as the wind mounts the back of a breeze
that succumbs,
the note is rising
subtle and sly
and upon a sliver of balding hill
eager with life and a restless thrill
small boys hold so very tightly
to fly their kites
like skeletons dancing
riding high.
raypool
Thu 21st Apr 2016 21:10
So pleased that you like this David, as I completely re-wrote it to try for that particular repetitive verse format - it's difficult for me to bring discipline in, but probably worth the effort - as you have highlighted.
I am satisfied that this is the best I could do on the subject matter!
Ray