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My Eyes Will Ever


My Eyes Will Ever
 
Tip me a wink 
Don't let my heart sink
There's so much passion in the thoughts that I think
 
Pray hold out your hand
Help me to understand
All that your heart wants to find in a man
 
Look deep in my eyes
Take full note of my sighs
I can promise you nothing if you take these for lies
 
I will seek out your trust
For such is a must
No future can be found if merely coupled by lust
 
To be with you is all
My ambitions aren't small
I aim to be always here to enthrall
 
A journey through life
Bound as man and wife
Forever faithful no matter what strife
 
The bond must be strong
For a journey so long
To hold onto these precepts is the depth of my song
 
I wait now for you
To ponder what's true
And linger right here just admiring the view
 
For beauty takes no time
To capture in sweet rhyme
I hope my eyes will ever gaze upon thine
My sweet and lovely Valentine
 
©Rhumour
January 25th 2009

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clarissa mckone

Wed 22nd Jul 2009 03:47

Hi dave, very nice poem, Im sure she would love it.

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