The Echoes poetry competition to celebrate Write Out Loud's 20th anniversary is now open.  Judged by Neil Astley.

Competition closes in 7 days, 9 hours. Get details and Enter.

SUPERMARKET CHECKUP

shoppers enter the grinning mouth

plunder the rows of stacked teeth

reaching in for plaque,

the dentist's pin spots pinging

leaving no possibility of dark rest

instead

needs, desires constantly

put to the test,

the mouth and the teeth

grotesquely brightly expressed

 

and the trolleys like probing implements

applied doing the marble glide.

At the end of the day long session

everyone spitted out,

a little pain,

a little gain.

🌷(1)

◄ O C D

THERE ARE NO RIGHTS OR WRONGS ►

Comments

No comments posted yet.

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message