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HOW LOW CAN YOU GET?

weak ankles took me to a clinic

in the nineteen fifties.

Mum worrying enough for us both

low chairs for kids

alice in wonderland

long stinking corridors

the grim reaper in white coat

sun shining through crittall windows

brave new world.

 

I couldn't speak for fear

they surrounded me like interrogators

that was the nineteen fifties

sixty years later

an osteopath told me I had flat feet

how low can you get,

not to mention indiscreet.

 

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raypool

Mon 9th May 2016 16:40

Thanks David A1 for noticing that; fancy not knowing I had them though !

Yes martin, my mum's house had them - murder to paint and as you say warped to hell and draughty . Room 101 basically. Thanks for that.

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Martin Elder

Mon 9th May 2016 12:34

Crittall windows, there is a blast from the past Ray. I remember them well. awkward metal things that used to warp in the heat. I love the grim reaper in the white coat.

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