sometimes I miss you
as the earth would miss the moon
if it drifted away and said
it's ok i'll be back soon.
Knowing as I do that
bonds are hard to break,
and freedom is a heady wine
at times like these
when thoughts entwine
its almost more than I can take.
Awwr Ray...christ, I know that feeling. I often think of my two dear friends, now long gone, and it aches inside so much. I grieve for them in a way I never did with my mother.
Love the brevity and simplicity of this, with the emotional punch to the guts that it provokes, as it raises the individual memories of the reader.
Precious Williams
Thu 12th May 2016 21:47
I love this!
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Helen Elliott
Fri 13th May 2016 10:14
I read this yesterday and it made me cry. I love the simplicity, the dotted rhymes but mostly the amount of feeling in the piece. This really resonates.