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The Table

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The table, says Sergio, used to be an altar

It was sacramental, where the body and blood was truly shared

It was a confessional where all was forgiven, the Prodigal welcomed

Where you came in need and left fulfilled

Where you met in communion, bitterness laid aside, differences suspended

Where strangers were welcomed

Where to have was celebrated and to have not was left at the door

Where we shared and served each other

Where need came before appetite.

The table was strong, it would last a lifetime, it drew us back.

A romantic view perhaps.

Now, we eat off our knees, alone, silently, before a screen.

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Dave Morgan

Thu 4th May 2023 17:39

Thank you Keith, it's good to see some old material standing the test of time. Ofg course it has religious symbolism but it's more elemental than that. Made me re-read Steve and Ray's comments. There is always a temptation to find a killer last line whether a poem needs it or not. If I had omitted the last two lines would it have made any difference?

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keith jeffries

Wed 3rd May 2023 21:58

Dave,
Thank you for this poem which I read before looking at the comments. Perhaps it had a very different impression on me than the others. It begins at an altar where sacred food is given and shared ; synonymous with holy communion and then moves along to the end where the informal act at the last supper sees a congregation at the altar rail in a reverential setting. I could be wrong but this is how I have interpreted it. Nonetheless a poem crafted with great thought.
Thank you for this.
Keith

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Dave Morgan

Fri 20th May 2016 23:22

Thanks Ray and Steve. Completely inspired by a passing comment from a member of Bolton International Writers Project which is a great mix of migrants of all persuasions to Bolton.

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steve pottinger

Fri 20th May 2016 15:00

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, Dave. Killer last line.

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raypool

Sun 15th May 2016 23:00

Fabulous writing, Dave. Would I be right in feeling that this has a similarity with the viewing of Stonehenge from a discreet distance? I don't know, but the last line brings home a truth that feels like something insipid when compared with the strength and message within.

Ray

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