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I want to right click you
save you as an  emotion
put you on the desktop
where keyboard and mouse
are the best friends
she had no idea
I had right clicked her
saved her to my desktop
I started with her painted toes
her red shoes
ran a tracker ball up her leg
admired her fabric threads
you cant right click girls
and save em to your desktop
in an ideal world
I would right click you
save you to my desktop
so I could admire you at my leisure
not at the mercy of fleeting pub rooms
middle of the night when I cant sleep
I could open the folder I stored you in
look at all the snapshots
run rings
lets build a paddling pool
because its raining inside
and fill it with our emotions
and reside there
lets watch high tide there
mark our ground there
talk our lives there
we could catch up with each others lives
we have built a paddling pool
become inflated with this elevated exciting feeling
of new  love
there are sparks
in the form of tidal marks
look how high you take me
I better check the plumb line
I better not capsize
too many emotions at the same time
cant be juggled too confusing
lets wallow in self pity you and I
you talk about yours
and ill talk about mine

◄ tiny tears

this is war ►

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Gus Jonsson

Thu 30th Jul 2009 00:19

Do this a lot my self Pete steal someone ... take them to photoshop.... then down down into my secret files...

well done as always
Gus
PS hows the old war wound...?

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Andy N

Tue 28th Jul 2009 22:30

nice one, pete

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Jon

Tue 28th Jul 2009 21:25

Good to hear your romantic meanderings;different to some of your other stuff,yet can still recognise your voice in this!

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Francine

Tue 28th Jul 2009 18:06

Oh là là... encore des chaussures rouges ; )

I can relate so well to this Peter...
Tu sais le dire...
xxxxx

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