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SUMMER OF THE SOMME 1916

In a rain-filled blood billed hole

Lies a body but no soul.

What was once a laughing life

Now cold as meat beneath the knife.

Unrecognisable as human form

This thing that once was loving...warm,

Face down...obscured from prying eye

Of pals still living passing by.

Survivors - comrades of the dead

Unmindful of what lies ahead,

Stagger on to other pits

And other content blown to bits.

But there above that death spilled rim

A solitary sign remains of him.

In a final last salute

There stands a lonely mud-slimed boot.

And as his fellows pass that hole

Each reaches out to touch its sole

And rest there in a mute farewell

As they move on to face their personal hell.

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POEM ON THE EUROPEAN PROJECT-author unknown ►

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 6th Jun 2016 16:43

The problem of humanity - its wish to impose its decisions
and choices on others...politics through to war and back
again, seems to be some sort of merciless cycle we find
impossible to avoid down the centuries. Are we puppets
of some pre-ordained plan or test? It's enough to make
a soul wonder!

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Jeff Dawson

Sun 5th Jun 2016 18:55

That says it as it is, and no doubt that was probably the tip of the iceberg, difficult to comprehend really, respect to all, thanks for reading Jutland.

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M.C. Newberry

Sat 4th Jun 2016 02:50

Thanks Harry. As I mentioned in a comment elsewhere,
loss in war has touched my own family and my late
father not only survived the WW1 Western and Italian
Fronts but was in uniform again for WW2. There can
be no other generation expected to endure so much.
How ironic, and bitter gall for my mother, that he
should die from TB aged 50 in 1949 leaving her and six children to cope as best they could in a poor post-war Britain.
The North Atlantic Treaty Organisation has succeeded
in helping to maintain the peace since - even when
the EU failed in Kosovo & its regions; now indulging
in power posturing over Ukraine when it should be
especially aware of the history of the old Bear Russia
- blighted by invasion from the West and still ready
to react to any imagined threat for all sorts of political reasons, internal and external.
An inspiration for my poem was my memory of Robert
Graves' account in "Goodbye To All That" - about how
he & his comrades would shake the visible hand of a
body buried in the trench wall when they passed by.
Sanity can be preserved in unpredictable ways!

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 3rd Jun 2016 22:36

M.C.
This is a very true account of what real soldiers would do in times of war. They made their small symbolic tribute
and just got on with it. As all people did. The point was that everyone was in it together on the battlefront.

The second war was more inclusive still. At the age of eleven I had to sit in a shelter listening to the bombs falling outside (as did many here, -and eventually- in Germany.) I once saw two of my mates pulled out from under slabs of concrete, while a seaman - who had only docked that day - ran screaming around the bombed shelter under which his family were buried...The soldiers who touched that boot would fully understand why me and a few of my mates climbed on a flat roof looking for anti-aircraft shrapnel the following day...it was a case of life going on for the young.

As that guy Hart said: The trouble with calling war horrid is that it is so `thumpingly obvious`(and it is) But also,
obvious - in a very touching way - is the way the sufferers
deal with it. In a situation where almost everyone had to endure hardship of some sort, stories drawing too much attention to one`s self was out of order.

One of the problems with Brexit scoffing the idea that there would ever be another European war is that the idea
was `thumpingly obvious` both in 1914 and 1945 and yet
the landscape of Europe is strewn with the crosses of the dead... It`s not their patriotism or feeling that is in question - it is their common sense.

Your poem (which also touches the `soul`) caused me to think all this...thanks.










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