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"Monday Bloody Monday"

"Monday Bloody Monday"

Head bowed against siling rain
Collar up shielding ears
Hat brim a leaking spout
Shoes beat a tattoo as
He Lowried,
Uphill,
Cobbled streets.
And rued his need of meat
And bread
And eggs
And milk for tea.

A passing car scythed
Gutter water
Over polished shoes
He raised his fist
And ripped a curse
That, against the wind skirl
Went unheard

A shopping list
Suit out from Wizard cleaners.

Perhaps, if he had the cash,
A treat for the dog.

Glimpsed by eyes
Behind net curtains
Safe in the dry;

“Where's he going?”
“Who is he anyway?”
“He'll be soaking”
“He'll be catching his death…”

A car backfires
Once or twice
Or maybe more
Curtains twitch
Then settle
Idle curiosity satisfied.

Cleansing rain
Flushing blood
Into flooding gutters

Cruciform sprawled in the road
A measured man
And his stuff

Curly Kale
Carrots
Shotgun cartridges

False teeth


A Belgian bun.

 

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◄ "In Calella"

"Ben and Tillie" ►

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Robert Mann

Fri 17th Jun 2016 00:09

Rich - personally I picture the bleak terraced streets of Manchester (the murderous rain and Lowry) and a possible gang hit, where no-one saw anything. Great imagery and a solemn tale.
Rob

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Simon Widdop

Thu 16th Jun 2016 23:34

Powerful imagery there rich! Really enjoyed that

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Various

Thu 16th Jun 2016 18:38

Wow nice one Richard I really felt this anonymous walk down a terraced street in my mind in Harrogate...
Thank you.

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