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1970 (for Greg Freeman)

At the crossroads of Blackhorse Lane

and Forest Road, past the ferry Inn

a long long walk to Spurs

undertaken with relish

along the railway wall that ran

across the marshes

trolleybus poles still in place

saturdays still smelled of fish,

chips in bags, the debris

like a paperchase.

 

The crittall - eyed walls

of Raelbrook shirts backed up

the multiple bus stops

where rain fell at timetable times,

and when evenings emptied their flats

the Royal Standard opened,

hot music, cabaret

tinsel fringed organ and drums.

 

Rodi's cafe handed down

with legacy of tiled surrounds

blowouts with grease and precision

five shillings a throw

I should know

I was there

 when 1970 was just a dare.

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raypool

Wed 27th Jul 2016 16:08

Thanks Martin. I think I may be older than you but we sing from the same hymn sheet ! Trolleybuses with their overhead wires were like big dodgems and great for atmosphere. Brighton did have them, after the trams went - I've got some old punch tickets off the trams with all the destination printed on them. Stop right there!
That area (Walthamstow)by the way was highly depressing but so right for the period!

Ray

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Martin Elder

Sun 24th Jul 2016 20:48

Great poem Ray. I still have vague recollections of trolleybuses running when I was a kid, I think it was in Brighton. I love the lines
The crittall - eyed walls
of Raelbrook shirts backed up
the multiple bus stops.
Nice one

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Greg Freeman

Sun 24th Jul 2016 14:04

Thank you, Ray, for dedicating a poem to me, even if it is situated in the locale of Spurs. I know I should rise above the partisan politics of football to admire all you are doing in this poem; there are great lines in this, such as "the rain fell at timetable times", and many others.Trolleybus poles, too! I will only add that 1970 was the year that Chelsea won the FA Cup for the first time in their history - and I was there, aged 17, when they did it!

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