GETTING A GRIP
One day of a lonely life
my thoughts became entwined
it did not take a great amount
of will to settle my mind.
Resorting to the grip 'n drip
to muster up the mustard
I savoured some photos of impossible beauty
a sense of something impossibly fruity.
Though with the degradation of age
and its fruitless dreams of heritage
my thoughts debased by nubile youth
the evidence would give the game away
with an orgasm like the tender cry
of a sad old wolf in the wilderness
a dissemination of fluid
blown back
by rejection
into a seam of infected illusion
and a sense of lonely confusion.
raypool
Sat 30th Jul 2016 12:03
Thanks David. I like to use bathos and pathos to reduce known attitudes; basically a laughable concept but as you say not really -considering the literature and serious concerns such matters generate. I think what you say about natural desire is a sort of dream of conquest in a sense which always involves temporary subjugation of another partner with consequent disgust on a certain level. Sorry but that's how I see sex, mainly my own experience. The hand is safe (in the right hands).
Ray