Time Flues
Time Flues
My early years were spent
Gazing out on a scene,
A mixture of mills and mines,
With their chimneys and smoke stacks,
And hillocks of freshly hewn coal.
Chimneys standing proud,
Reaching, seemingly, right up to the sky,
Like the grandest pipes of a cathedral organ,
Built of blackened stone,
Playing a worn-out tune,
And casting their shadow on the
Folk and the village below.
We had cooling towers at the
Power station that stood down
In the valley, billowing out the clouds of steam
That floated over the town.
Clouds that gathered, as they drifted along,
The grit and the dust and the grime
Blown from the mines and the spoil heaps
That had formed, over who knows what length of time.
The spoil heap by the park spoiled our view
With its grit and its dust and its grime
Drifting onto the washing
That Mum had pegged out on the line.
The grit and the grime and the coal dust,
As though ‘ magnet-drawn’ to my neck
Meant a regular wash with a loofah.
I washed, and then Mum came to check.
Our house, a back-to-back,
A ‘one-up-one-down’,
An insignificance. One of thousands
Dotted around the town
Each with a chimney
That belched out, 9 months a year,
The dirty and the sulphurous smoke
That buggered up the atmosphere,
That came from burning the dampened coal
That fed the fire.
(Put another lump on!)
A future generation’s funeral pyre!
Bedtime? Fires burned through the night
Fire-grate banked with nutty-slack
Pouring out its night-time smoke
Just as filthy, just as black.
The night-time smoke that in the daylight
Descended onto the clothing
That Mum had pegged out
And onto my neck, that needed washing
At least once a week.
The dirty and the sulphurous smoke
That, mixed so beautifully
With the mists, hanging close by the river,
Produced the thick and swirling fogs,
Or choking murderous smogs.
Now the power station and the mills and the mines are gone,
And with them, their chimneys, their smoke and the smog.
Gone are the coal-fired houses,
With the washing lines that stretched across the street.
My children’s children will never know
How to start a fire with twists of newspaper;
A bundle of firewood, and a shovelful of coal.
Future generations will never know
What a draw-tin, or poker, or ‘coil-oil’ is.
Will they care? I think not.
And who pegs clothes out any more?
(A tumble dryer’s a must)
Even though the air is clear of
The grit and the grime and the dust.
p.s. I still wash my neck, at least once a week.
winston plowes
Sun 16th Aug 2009 22:12
Hi Stephen,
Great stuff this, much enjoyed reading it. Win
liked the rhythm in this section -
Clouds that gathered, as they drifted along,
The grit and the dust and the grime
Blown from the mines and the spoil heaps
That had formed, over who knows what length of time.