I forgot all I knew
just so I could forget you.
Your cheap parlour tricks
that seduced my wandering eye..
I followed them..head panning along
within deadlong continuum for
intel's trance and chance' sake..
and, now--
in my former reality erased--
you struggle to re-create your former place.
Just coming back elP to say I always try to couch my comments in the realm of imagination too, hoping to get nearer to truths rather than a surgical assessment of construction. I am only an amateur after all !
Ray
elPintor
Mon 22nd Aug 2016 00:51
Thanks, Ray..but, I tell you, I am more fond of some of the comments I read than my own writing sometimes..yours included.
elP
Like a hall of mirrors, a Bruce Lee film elP. I love "deadlong continuum". Inspired. It has a power displayed within its brevity.
Ray
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elPintor
Mon 22nd Aug 2016 23:35
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xCc-RWIp7XU
HA! Henry Kissinger..this is what I was telling Ray about..I'll really have to watch my back now.
Thanks, David..I'll have a couple for you this evening.
elP xx