Victory Hill 2050
Beneath primrose and violet sunscreens
vibrant passions bloom and wilt in some
patterned, noxious routine.
The fraternity lies athwart the boundary line,
lounging in heavy boulder sun-scape,
all in white except one, in green and black,
takes stick and slander with good heart,
gives as good as handed out.
I rise and stretch from the hearty crowd,
and slip up slanted turf, reach out,
and grasp for the higher ground,
for darts of fear at floods to come back round.
There atop the place the elders sit;
I approach one, see their watchful eyes
flicker, flit; take in, where land meets twilit sky,
the trees that sway, like hair blown wild;
the horizon a mess of mauve, cracked alabaster.
I sit beside, arms clasping knees,
they're rocking back, they're a restless soul-cry;
they turn - address me, above the cold noises
of descending dusk: "Ask me a question"
in tones of near-desperation;
"Ask me anything", they say.
They despise the night that washes blue
from eyes of thought and colour smiles.
I turn and gaze out at the view,
reply first with silence,
then say the second thing that comes to mind:
"Do you
remember
what
it
meant
to
be
free?"
raypool
Sat 20th Aug 2016 21:59
What a revelation this is, David. I await your work with thin patience to see what has inspired you, and this comes up with a real challenge for the imagination. A prescient notion of the future not to be relished. The interesting thing is that it has a barbaric quality that makes one think of a folkmoot almost . You just needed a series of lighted beacons to complete such a picture.
Ray