Dreams In A Pale Mist
Swirling dreams in a pale mist;
Part-remembered shades of a distant past,
Creeping ethereally as wandering wraiths,
Drifting on the edge of consciousness,
Hovering on the threshold of perception.
A memory, or just a fantasy?
Following the tenuous subliminal traces
Of the ectoplasmic emanation
Elicits only faintly fleeting echoes
That reverberate with unresolved recognition,
And wriggle elusively away from waking recollection
In the pervasive anonymity of the new day.
Trevor Alexander
Wed 24th Aug 2016 13:24
Thanks for comments.
Harry, not sure I want to extend it, I'll give it some thought, but I take your point about 'resolutely', and have tinkered accordingly....