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YOU GRANNIES

You grannies

you old wise ones,

not always saying enough

or maybe too much

with benefit of hindsight

and desperate for someone else's future.

 

You've seen the comings and goings

old wounds opened up

fresh ones with dawns and sunsets

and you don't always want to say

what you feel knowing

that young ones cannot kneel

 

yet one day when distances are blurred

they may yet take your hand

into some untrodden promised land

when the time is right

into the overarching light.

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◄ DON'T ASK

THE MAN IN THE WHITE COAT ►

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raypool

Thu 1st Sep 2016 21:46

You're in safe hands with me Harry.
Thanks for commenting !

Ray

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Harry O'Neill

Thu 1st Sep 2016 15:48

Ray,
The thought fills me with a macabre sense of horror.

Just take the grannies, and leave us grand-dads where we are ?

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