The Bar Maids Brittle Bliss
I've stolen five minutes of this crisp and quiet night
The crackle soothes my brittle ears and
I smoke through my bones
No quality of silence here
I still hear hum and bustle behind glass wall
The boxes rattle by my right
Are rife with swollen faces and brittle brains
as my own trying to find their way home
They won't get there
not this time round
Dry lips and dry hands set in stone
Grip me by my bones
My crooked bones do all the talking
They file out and poison my shaky silence
as I poison their innards with blind bliss and lack of inhibitions
16/01/16
Green
Thu 15th Sep 2016 17:36
Not at all, I'm here for feedback and love to hear what other poets thinks. Its all very useful and interesting! Thanks Stu x