"Donegal Eden"
Our island heaven
Cut off whenever high tide
Covered the causeway.
Secluded from prying eyes
Caz fell in love at first sight.
When the tide went out
We drove across the wet strand
Parking in the dunes
The van inadvertently
Bedded in axle deep sand.
Stuck fast but Caz laughed
Cracked open a bottle of rum
We watched the sun set
Over Arranmore and kissed
Each other and blessed the stars.
There was a rock pool
Waist deep, spring water fresh filled
Heated by the sun
Washed out by the evening tide
Our jacuzzi, hot tub, spa.
We lived like sand boys
Happy, naked and drunken
Running and swimming
Campfire, singing and dancing
Loving, lost in each other.
At holidays’ end
A local towed the van free
Refusing reward
Patted his wallet, smirked, said
“These pictures – payment enough”.
Driving home silent
Leaving Donegal behind
Was hard for us both
Caz goodbyed at Biggleswade
I did not see her again.
I heard she’s wed now
With a son looks just like me.
I wrote, no replies.
I hope she remembers us
On our beach in paradise.
Rick Gammon
Fri 23rd Sep 2016 22:24
I used to dash off haikus while on buses - probably wrote hundreds - but not particularly good stuff - then on "countdown" one afternoon the word 'tanka' came up and I was intrigued - I find the 5 line strict syllable format useful for keeping my free form nature in check ?
I think of tanka as pregnant haiku ?