Forest Rabbit Crown Soft Stone
Forest Rabbit Crown Soft Stone
Was the name she introduced
On that candle light bright night
Where dreams were all self-produced
Desert Lion Hat Rough Silk
Was the name we all had guessed
For her stars were drowned in milk
Yet her sun in black was dressed
Those you hear were the words
In which I painted your ghost
Now that time has tuned my chords
Could I risk your nameless boast?
It is said that no one goes
Twice to a candle burnt place
But my disobedient toes
Bless the splendor of your grace
It was also said by me
To your pleb in a bus stop
‘Boy, I wish my blind heart plea
Would stop bleeding candle drops’
But a house is not a home
When a candle light tight fight
Hurt’s your feet and you’re alone
And away fades that bright night
And you shot me all your eyes
In a cold and windy glance
As I caught heavy strange lies
On a loose dust-dated chance
Choke a dusty coin old face
Leave the light pleb’s old dry dream
In the splendor of your grace
Glitter on your self-side team
In a vision you abused
Desert Lion Hat Rough Silk
Claimed a rotten truth amused
Sun black dreams in wind cold milk
Your name is both true and fake
As a candle light bright night
Calls you in remember shake
Forest Rabbit Crown Soft Stone
Stu Buck
Thu 22nd Sep 2016 12:33
this is fascinating. there are some amazing lines involved. the whole thing is mysterious. personally i feel it could be edited down as it does lag in places but thats not to take away from the achievement as its a really interesting piece.
In a vision you abused
Desert Lion Hat Rough Silk
Claimed a rotten truth amused
Sun black dreams in wind cold milk
and thats a great verse of poetry.