Haiku Collection #6
farewell my old skin
tattooed to amuse myself
words no longer true
~~~
this joy so fragile
my moon so white and slender
a breeze could take it
~~~
you sense the old man
with one more sad tale to tell
let star-gazing win
~~~
what of the coconut-
atom wrestles ocean
for the fabled shore
~~~
the man in the moon
disregarding all evil
takes a giant leap
Stu Buck
Thu 22nd Sep 2016 12:30
what of the coconut-
atom wrestles ocean
for the fabled shore
i absolutely love this one. it places image and intrigue over description which is what i enjoy most about haiku. brilliant, but no idea why.