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All things are transient,
The rowan tree grows,
season on season.
Senses the earth breathe
and shift in her roots.
The sun feeds her leaves.
Blossoms fruit to ripe red berries.
Away the leaves fall,
Night sky winters,
And frost snaps at her branches
She will repeat to fade.
finally managed the edit , how peculiar this has been
<Deleted User> (7073)
Wed 2nd Dec 2009 23:33
I took a look at your work, as we couldn't chat.
This is a beautifully delicate poem, the Rowen being rejuvinating in youthfullness and feminine in it's spiritual aspect. Lovely.
TC ;-)
Hi Carole,Loved this one... the cycle described beautifully. loved 'shift in her roots' and 'repeat to fade'. Win x
I get the sense of everything coming full circle here Carole. Beautifully written.
Cate xx
thanks for your your comments , i am sorry you see an underlying sadness francine , there is none intended at all , but maybe that is the mood you are in .
Last couple of days I have been thinking along the same lines...
Lovely imagery in this...
There is an underlying sadness as it can be related to love and loss...
Both feeling a little reflective at the moment, I see.
Nice work,
Cx
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Wed 2nd Dec 2009 23:48
shoeless nay clueless-loved the poem-BUT-and only a small one,would not 'she fades to repeat be better? that said,one funny quip,so to speak-top of the page indicates 'x number of users online'-makes it sound like an heroin addicts site! lol!-only a mad observation of mine(boo quietly!) Stef