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undercurrents

..sights remain adrift there is

no fixed point in the distance.

 

I'm still surviving

hand-to-mouth

on this meager

childhood allowance

 

--there's so much of me

I get to live without.

 

My bones are breaking under

the strain of constructing houses

where I cannot afford to live;

 

and, so, I live for flight

and the next place

I am to leave behind.

 

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Hazem Karim

Wed 13th Dec 2017 16:02

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Sun 25th Dec 2016 12:29

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elPintor

Tue 18th Oct 2016 01:59

I thank you kindly for reading, Suki..always good to know how a piece connects.

elP

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suki spangles

Mon 17th Oct 2016 23:31

--there's so much of me
I get to live without.

ElP expressed brilliantly. Also just read Retrograde - very affecting.

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Stu Buck

Fri 14th Oct 2016 12:25

glad you enjoyed it. i liked it a lot and have seen it a couple of times now. a proper thinking persons film, and like you said being able to stretch a one room scene in to a full movie is a feat and testament to the material.

elPintor

Fri 14th Oct 2016 02:26

Wow..I just watched it and I have to say that the writer did a great job of packing in so many ideas..there's quite a bit to process. And, it's not easy to make an interesting 88 minute movie that occurs all in one room.

Thanks for making my evening more tolerable.

elP

elPintor

Fri 14th Oct 2016 00:04

Hey, Stu..I was looking at a trailer for the movie and the premise does seem interesting. I also looked up the timeline of human advancement and it seems that some think we may have begun to develop some primitive form of agriculture around that time--some even say it coincides with the existence of adam (which btw is the Hebrew word for man).

Thanks for commenting..I'll see if I can find the movie.

elP

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Stu Buck

Thu 13th Oct 2016 11:49

very nice. reminds me a little bit (its a very tenuous link) of the film 'the man from earth' which is about a man that believes he is a cro-magnon who has lived for 14000 years and constantly has to move on from his friends and families. like i said, very tenuous but a good movie all the same.

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