I love you the Sky
She said The sea must be a lady
“The sea is me”, she meant
I took her words to be a fact, a factor in own my identity
I am sure that I am the shore
And at day break, I was still pure
Caramel, sandy and tan before I am kissed
Kissed wildly by the sun that melanises
Ebony to green, the sun that photosynthesises
And from your violent waves, My kinky hair a frizz
Awaken to a drunken state consciousness
You’re melody in my ears, harmonizing with the wind that moves you.
Swaying you, back and forth, coming in and out from afar
Then crashing in to destruct me beautifully
In heaps and heaps of clarity I saw My own Purity
Dunes to the end of a rivers mouth it flows
Engulfed as whole
No regrets, I adore you
You and I
You and me
You are me
“I am she” SZA
The Goddess of forbidden love
We became the beach that castles are made of
And where melinated kingdoms were washed away
Out of history, out of memory
“Stay”
Kings and queens submitting in a trance of dance to the beating rain
To the humming winds
The distance winds of the east that is,
The soft, warm currents of Mozambique
Southern Africa, do speak
And Roar Loudly to the west
“When your breath be too sweet for your lips to hold”
Love rain,
And when sorrow your thoughts fill
Drain, back to the ocean you must go.
“Drowning”, Instantly, suddenly to your pending absence
And my beats instantaneous, discontinuous in broken notes of your departure
The tide is low
But I am high
I cried ‘I love you the sky’
You say, I am ‘only the deep ‘blue ocean’ that mirrors you’
Rachel Mhlongo
Wed 19th Jul 2017 21:35
Hi Phillip Kelly! oh wow, thank you so much. I really appreciate how you analysed the poem❤. Thanks for the encouragement, I have a few (poems) in my pc but I have been so hesitant to post them, fearing they are not very good, my English is not perfect ?. Thank you very much though?