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A Beautiful Man

Today; thinking and chatting with a musical friend about the creative thing.  That gap nothing else satisfies.  Your own response.  Some aspect of the day distilled.  Here's mine today.

 

A Beautiful Man

 

So he’s tall.  Or not.

That he commands a room,

or skulks in a corner.

Watches.  Listens.

 

So he’s quick.  Perhaps.

A mind that moves,

builds new worlds.

Guards.  Honours.

 

Sure footed? Certain?

Cautious if needed;

clumsy when weary.

Dances regardless.

 

He’s old enough.  Maybe.

Caring more today;

to know better;

not to give a damn.

 

He has green eyes;

brown eyes or blue.

For each changing sea,

the earth and me.

 

That he knows rest,

to exist simply. Now.

The quiet breath

of being human.

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raypool

Fri 28th Oct 2016 19:37

An elusive concept , illusory and like a thought bubble just hanging for inspection .

Quite different Becky and worthy of examination.

Ray

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Becky Sowray

Tue 25th Oct 2016 16:56

Thanks Steve ?

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steve pottinger

Fri 21st Oct 2016 17:40

That's great, Becky!

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