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Such Strange Light

Such strange light
washing out
into the long night

Generous with pigment
volcanic reds and stella blues
you see that damp look
on the snapshot of my face

I wish someone had told me
wish someone had just shown me
dad, you could have warned me

O, how it burns
how it hurts to see yourself
suddenly, with that clarity
kept reserved for other people

In the rear-view mirror
in that mirror

Cold slate evenings
rudely cut in two
and poking through the gaping night
such a strange, strange light

Fickle thought
fickle life
fucks all
fickle thought
fickle life
forgive me…

 

(August 2016)

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Comments

Jemima Jones

Tue 25th Oct 2016 17:34

to me,this poem Tom,gives out an atmospheric duality of eeriness,and surreality.One of those kind of poems,you can read from many different angles,so to speak,which goes into making a great poem,which this one most certainly is.Thank you.Jemima.

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Stu Buck

Tue 25th Oct 2016 00:37

excellent stuff. i love the restraint you show here but there is such anger and sadness burning below the words. its an enviable piece of work

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Mon 24th Oct 2016 21:47

so glad that you reposted this one Tom



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