Lonely beat
You snap and I crumble
we are each other's weakness
you drop and I tumble
the other's only sweetness
we're tangled in the bleakness
while thriving in the heat
our shadows dance together
to the moonshine's lonely beat
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Thanks guys,
your right Colin the 'and' isn't necessary, Thanks! x
<Deleted User> (13762)
Fri 4th Nov 2016 09:26
a lonely beat that's short and sweet - nice one Green.
I wonder, do you need the 'and' after 'heat'?
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Stu Buck
Thu 24th Nov 2016 18:17
quite cohen-esque and lovely