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LONE WOLF

Lone Wolf

stirs his coffee

staring

to middle distance.

 

This new world of his

devoid of meaning

no line of resistance.

 

Stained by old habits

trained for movements

his mechanised character

spring compressed

 

Lone Wolf

with weary eyes

still sharp

used to hear the pin drop

 

now doors slamming

nerves fraying

uncertain dreams of praying

 

his mind a list discontinued

tick box the chase

an unknown face before death

impressed like a shroud

Lone Wolf in a crowd.

 

Those days of clean kills now over

flagwavers

prayer puppets

strung up on indulgent gods

 

making demands

self destructing

no taste

getting all the attention

 

Lone Wolf

stirs his coffee

no children to read to

to turn the light out for

 

no centres of operations

galaxies of challenge

now a supermarket and flats

where once were marble steps

to intrigue

 

his all day breakfast

lasts too long

growing cold with the pondering

footsore with aimless wandering.

 

The empty flat has a view

over middle distance

passing clouds unknowing

unwavering.

 

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raypool

Fri 4th Nov 2016 17:05

Very nice of you Suki I appreciate your input .

David, what more can I say. I thoroughly appreciate your input with all the weight you bring to such matters and in that regards I view your comments as a giant compliment . It's nice to see one's intentions hit a mark and in accord.
Some thoughts come to mind from what you have written; could there by perhaps a sort of addiction to adrenalin in these experiences, as in extreme demands on one's resources. Does life become fully formed in danger? I would expect that to be the case.

Love back. Ray

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suki spangles

Fri 4th Nov 2016 11:02

I love this poem. Some great lines ".. his mechanised character/spring compressed.." And the last verse too is perfect. Thanks for sharing.

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