JACK
Jack Walton was his name
Jack by name and Jack by nature
Jack the lad in fact
and a very naughty boy was he
around the time of fifty-three
beyond redemption in the classroom
defiant and damned right from the start
Jekyll and Hyde a friend of sorts
unsmashable by deeds and thoughts
I could have lost my sight one day
when a metal tube he threw my way
his father owned a gun from the war
in the hands of his son that son of a gun
scattered us boys like birds for fun
Overtaking on a bend
his life abruptly came to an end
his reputation in a moment scattered
in a dream of conquest that hardly mattered
raypool
Wed 9th Nov 2016 11:59
Thanks Colin - I wasn't happy either . Hope you like the alternative now ! You're drawing on the American trip again, I like it. This guy really epitomized a complete attitude to life and I doubt if he would have reached a decent age. He was the same age as me three score and thirteen at the present count.
Appreciate your frank opinion.