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THE ARCADE

Voices in the dark

called me back

to visit the arcade

set in a neat

brick facade of shops

entrance flanked

by hairdressers and minicab office

no sign up

though it was a cafe

had been for years.

 

Stripped of pretension

no daylight entering in

though a copy of the Sun

gave life to the place

but no welcoming

smells of cooking

 

word had gone round

the whites had moved on

now ruling the mysterious place like

an Egyptian tomb the new supremo

with his gold rings

eager and anxious to please

by turns sweeping

and serving, trying to be

everywhere at once

smiling at customers

like a rictus.

 

Once the arcade had

turned sharp right

a thriving upholstery shop

selling bolts of cloth, skeins

needlecraft patterns.

Now corners were

closed off and dark

cleaning apparel

leaning cold shouldered, stacked

 

I ordered tea

for eighty pee

as warming as it was cheap

but here was a man

who bought direct from China

an instinct for trade

adept at cutting corners.

 

I remembered as

a boy the garage there

red floor, the smell of fuel

and grease, relayed

this memory to the man

as he took the money

he gave a slight nod

almost a bow at how

history leaves a mark

 

like the one on his forehead

like a voice in the dark.

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◄ NOW THE DUST HAS SETTLED AGAIN

DOGGING ►

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raypool

Sat 19th Nov 2016 23:08

Always nice to have your thoughts elP. David raised the Godwin's Law point as an aside. which I verified on google, not knowing of it. I can't dignify your further thoughts without really understanding your further train of thought, , but i'm sure you must have thought it through! Forgive me.

Thanks for reading. Ray

elPintor

Sat 19th Nov 2016 01:18

Please pardon me, Ray, for butting in where I've not much to contribute, but Godwin's law seems much like six degrees of separation..logically speaking, "all roads lead to Rome."

..thinking out loud, Ray..thanks for your time.

elP

btw
fear not a curse on the presidential member..maybe it will resemble something more like leprosy?

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raypool

Fri 18th Nov 2016 22:25

Thanks Martin. It is weird to contain an entirely different memory of a place it may as well have been on another planet. Reading it to myself I feel like a character in a Ray Bradbury novel!

I checked out the Godwin law and it poses a really interesting point! Even in an arcade the rules of commerce grind on. I do find the experience of getting service in the UK mainly a stilted one and with little joy. Being an old bastard like me it just adds in to the general grumpiness.
As for Trump he's not even on the throne yet - I fear he may become flaccid in office.

Ray

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Martin Elder

Thu 17th Nov 2016 23:00

wow Ray what a beautifully crafted picture of an arcade, I can catch the 'smell fuel and grease' nice one

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