Thaw (Haiku)
Pick axe breaks the ice
polar bears swim together
embrace on dry land
Note: No profile exists for this entry - most likely it was deleted.
Comments
Hi Janet. Can polar bears handle pick axes? In any case liked this. nice combination of cold / hard and warm / soft. Reminds me of when I was walking the tow path near marple 8 years ago and saw some workmen breaking the ice on the canal viaduct. If left the expanding ice can crack the stone work.
Saving the canal
Marple viaduct
steel harpoons pierce the thick ice
navys hold their breath
win x
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
Andy N
Thu 10th Sep 2009 08:22
havent done haikus in ages... you are getting me back in the mood for them.. nice stuff!