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Misty Islands

Upon misty islands where I was born

Where I have trod across hill moor and snow

Since I was a lad

Where my father’s father and forefathers before

Of generations now long ago gone

That did toil and reap

Plant and sow

Did cut and fashion from oaks

Both broad and long

Tall ships no more to languish

On these tender shores

But to set forth across open seas

To explore exchange and take

In the name of some holy saint named trade

With no fear of falling off the edge of worlds end

Or being burnt by all that is unknown

Drowned swallowed up in a storm

Or torn to shreds

Who did not stop or bring about their own demise

In a bid to build an empire

Across lands where the sun never sets

To chase that golden purse

To chide collide and war with other like

Minded souls

Big and small

Some with little more than canoes

Others with ships loaded in full sail

Tipped and topped to the brim

Across salty tongue licked breeze

Now becalmed

By all that can no longer be found and done

In the name of greed   

 

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Martin Elder

Sun 18th Dec 2016 22:44

Thanks Ray, Colin and Nigel

great to see you today as always Nigel.

I agree with you Colin we very often are prompted to think about to think of other things by others poetry and as you say this is not a bad thing. I started off in one direction with this piece, almost in the vein of a folk song and ended up going in somewhere entirely different. I look forward to what these thoughts of ancestors bring forth from you.

There is I confess a bit of boys own adventure about this together with the sense of the explorer that exists in many of us even today. They were indeed a hardy bunch that pushed forward across the world in all conditions

Thanks again Guys

Martin

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raypool

Fri 16th Dec 2016 22:25

Days of extreme bravery and risk taking and blind determination when the rewards were great - a cleft stick when viewed with the benefit of hindsight with the monumental consequences all too plain to see and feel, and thanks to the internet right into the homes of most of us.

Apart from that, a thoroughly good read with a strong dash of the Empire still echoing when I was a boy, Martin.

Ray

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Thu 15th Dec 2016 20:15

very enjoyable Martin, made me think of many things which were all probably unrelated to your theme or message but nonetheless that's what poetry, in part, should do. There are hints of who-do-you-think-you-are ancestry and what-did-our-ancestors-ever-do-for-us which, coincidentally, have been themes running through my mind of late although settling my mind to write these days has been nigh on impossible. All the best, Colin.

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Nigel Astell

Thu 15th Dec 2016 15:30

Across salty tongue licked breeze

some great lines in this Martin and with it a strong message for all!

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