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You break anew to make

 

A boy asked God

"Could you please
give me patience? "

God to the boy

"I will send to you challenge! "

The boy to God

"I think we are not
On the same page
When I asked
You for patience
It is not for  a change! "

God to the boy

"Patience presupposes hassle,
In the remoulding
Process to render you
Tolerant and gentle!"

Boy to God

"Yes hassle
To change
The peevish
To gentle
I shouldn't forget
Your omniscience mantle!
You break
Anew to make! "  //

Sometimes we need shock treatment to understand things

 

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Comments

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Alem Hailu G/Kristos

Wed 21st Dec 2016 23:54

Thank you for the enthusing feedback

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 21st Dec 2016 16:51

Very relevant in this old world of ours. Patience and understanding
are of such importance in the human condition.
I place them alongside tolerance and kindness...comprising the essential
lubricants needed to oil the wheels of our ongoing existence together.

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