Footprints in the Sand
So, I switch my gaze back towards the ocean
and listen to it's
tranquil music-
a melody
I could only imagine
would sound sweeter
had there still been
two sets of footprints in the sand.
Comments
Thanks Ray!
Tristan
Looking back towards the sea adds a dimension to the experience of sadness because of retracing a path already made, but as one person - just staring out to sea would not have had that impact, I believe. So well done here.
Ray.
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Andromeda
Wed 18th Jan 2017 22:51
So simple, but very moving. I like that somber undertone.