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Believing

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A woman of many beliefs 

Never believed you would be the one

That understood all of her

Took many do overs to believe that she could love someone else

That she could understand someone else

Believing in the greater good of a man 

This man

Her man

Believing in trust

Believing in opportunity 

Believing in communication

Believing in the art of loving

A sista that was so afraid but yet so oblivious to the fact that she had opened up for the first time what

Her mind had been wanting 

Her body had been craving 

LOVE

Any type of anger she had built up 

She threw at him 

And when he caught  that anger he placed it back with a simple kiss 

She waited for him to run

She wanted him to run 

She waited for him to stop believing in her

He stayed

He showered her with more love

And when she caved

She realized he was what made her feel the sunshine on gloomy days 

He was the one she could unwind with

He protected her

He made her feel safe

He wore the crown

He was king

 

...And she believed

◄ Coliea...A Warrior

Love is beautiful ►

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Phillip Kelly

Wed 19th Jul 2017 20:18

The power of this poem is in the interesting effective structure .. Which puts emphasis on the man and your love ...... And the first two lines are truly remarkably amazing and convey the importance and value of this mans love

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lynn hahn

Fri 20th Jan 2017 04:15

Put me on the list for this poem to come to life.

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Saniya

Thu 19th Jan 2017 16:14

Thank you Raj! It's actually not real just a feeling that maybe one day will become real.

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Raj Ferds

Thu 19th Jan 2017 08:49

Brilliant imagery Saniya and a story well told.
I guess this is real??

Raj

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