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Weekend Alone

an empty morning

your pillow
how you left it
curled under
on the edge

i remind myself
to think of you
in the new silence

the cat watching
with the small
movements
of a ghost

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◄ Walking in the Woods

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Stu Buck

Mon 23rd Jan 2017 22:02

this is fantastic!!! i love it, love it. the detail of the pillow is key, its the little things you notice the most. and the last verse, that moves the whole piece so perfectly. i am a big fan of this. its also structured perfectly.

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