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Cold Coffee

She sits at the kitchen table,

desultorily stirring a lukewarm coffee cup,

her thoughts a thousand miles away.

In her mind, she shades her eyes

against the sun’s glare,

as she sees the cobalt sea.

The figure running up the beach casts a shadow,

a shadow that brings chilling memories

of the distant kitchen table.

He sprawls beside her,

and all she can think is

that she hates cold coffee.

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◄ The Young Lad At The Ritz  (Radio Edit)

Winter’s Bite ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 9th Feb 2017 17:12

I like this Trevor but am struggling to pin it down in my head which is a little stuffed with snot 'n' dust right now. I can't help but think of the 2015 Tunisia shootings: 'her thoughts a thousand miles away...the figure running...brings chilling memories'. But the last four lines confuse me. Maybe I'm on the wrong track altogether. As I said, stuffed up head! All the best, Colin.

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