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Enough Is Enough

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"that's it," she said, "enough....I'm through"

- she's had her fill of making do


she's sick to death of putting up 

with nothing but a half-filled cup


dropping out of going without

she thinks it's time that she got out


resigning from the daily grind

she's leaving drudgery behind


this friend of mine at last is free

to seize her opportunity


she's off to Greece hoping to find

herself, like Shirley Valentine

 

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◄ An Exquisite Hand Job

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Paul Waring

Thu 16th Feb 2017 17:32

Hi Suki, you are right. How perceptive of you.

In 1982, as a crazy dreamer of a young man I set out to spend a winter on a Greek island. Sadly, on the 2nd day whilst hitch-hiking through France all my possessions were stolen!

Never got to Greece but, after getting a new passport in Genoa, spent 2 unforgettable months in Italy, France, Spain, Morocco and Portugal until my money ran out!

Paul

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suki spangles

Thu 16th Feb 2017 12:59

Nice one Paul,

This probably applies to most of us - in different ways - at one time or another.

Suki

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Paul Waring

Thu 16th Feb 2017 10:47

Hi Lynn, so pleased you loved this poem. And, sure, you can go with her, I'm certain she'd be thrilled by your company (not to mention your self-defence skills!) ??

Thanks Lynn,

Paul

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lynn hahn

Thu 16th Feb 2017 01:23

Can I go with her? Love it

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