traveler (la revancha)
forward running
pulling threads from
mother's skirt
to me, she shows
her secrets
and from her
I keep mine...
Comments
elPintor
Wed 22nd Feb 2017 01:45
Hey, Stu..thanks so much for all of your comments on my recent writings. I kept this one brief because I haven't had a whole lot to say lately--or maybe because I can't seem to find enough slack in my jaw to tell it like it is.
Either way, I'm really glad for your reading..take care, Stu!
elP
brilliant! so simple, so brief but stays with the reader. clever, i love it!
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elPintor
Wed 22nd Feb 2017 12:33
Ahh--iniquity..when you aren't born onto a level playing field, it's all you can expect without disappointment.
Thanks for commenting, David.
elP