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Echo and Narcissus

Echo and Narcissus

 

         after Echo and Narcissus, by Glyn Philpot (bronze with green patina)

 

 

Did either of them have a moment’s unease?

 

He, before the pool of social media reflected back all he wanted to see,

She, before she found herself cursed by the god of Abandon, that minor deity

of the Home Counties

 

who thought he had only to ask the people, give them a voice,

but leaving her with no more than an echo, brrrrexit, brrrrexit , bouncing

off the hard edges of our White Cliffs.

 

We all saw the ripple, grasping at her hand, the better to steady himself

on that slippery slope of state-craft, the downhill path of his first 100 days,

though she didn’t yet know that he should not be touched, nor she do the touching,

 

and that such a gesture would doom her to  that special relationship, 

for him never to offer anything that might speak of honour, of connection,

but dog her words, special, special, whenever she tries to speak her mind.

 

For now she knows that she is truly alone, his back turned to hers, blocking

out her sunlight,  for all she holds herself ready for that tender moment,

her own hands ready to caress.

 

 

Karen Izod

22.2.17

 

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karen izod

Sun 26th Feb 2017 07:42

the Bronze which inspired this poem, is currently on display at Pallant House Gallery in Chichester, as part of their Classicism in British Art exhibition.

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karen izod

Fri 24th Feb 2017 06:41

thank you Ray, and for bringing your own imagery to this - the valuable vase, which is so vulnerable in the wrong hands!

I appreciate you taking time over it and your own generous comments,
Karen

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raypool

Thu 23rd Feb 2017 22:40

This is like holding a valuable vase and examining a story painted on around its perimeter which holds us in its thrall. Then you see the delicate irony and political slipslide of the parallels with the myth. It is quite gentle yet insistent, maybe a part of your character I imagine.

Yours is not the sort of material to rush through , and I have given it my best shot!

Congratulations Karen.

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karen izod

Thu 23rd Feb 2017 06:37

thanks Greg.
I realise there is a very short shelf life to this kind of poem, things change by the moment, perhaps that's why mythology helps!

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Greg Freeman

Wed 22nd Feb 2017 16:36

Enjoyed hearing this at Write Out Loud Woking on Monday, Karen. Clever and timely. Thanks for posting!

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