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High street

Walking down the small town high street

Among the liquorice all sorts

Of shops cafes and pubs

There is the barbers

With flashing neon scissors

The corner café with the bloke

Who has cleared his plate

Of sausage egg beans and chips

And from a yawning plastic pouch

His hand rolls a neatly tailored cigarette

As his face his mind are somewhere else

 

Further up the street the vape shop

Is full of folks and clouds of

Heavily scented smiling smoke

Cheery chatting faces

Say you can’t touch me in here

I am warm snug and safe

Then there’s the pub on the next corner with

The bloke who looks like the dad from the Royle family

His eyes intent on the T.V. screen

Further up earlier passed the

Middle eastern muscled guy

Leaning against the outside of his shop

Bored and blowing smoke rings into the air

Later on the way back his barbers shop is full

Scissors busy clicking as he dances round the chair

 

 

Then there’s the shop with everything

But the kitchen sink

On the cheap slacked and stacked to the ceiling

In places

Including diaries from 2012 for just fifty p

In a corner salon, an older woman has had her hair

Coloured styled and waved

Looking uncertainly in the mirror

At the co-op that’s all bright sterile lime green

A queue is formed at the tills like those lost souls

Waiting for a hand out at the soup kitchen

Outside, a pregnant east European women

Smiles and proffers a copy of the big issue

To no avail

The shop with mops and brooms

Everything conceivable in plastic

Including storage box some translucent

Others all colours of the rainbow

 

Up and down the street

Are a smattering of charity shops

Full of other people’s tat

DVD’s that nobody wants to watch

And C. D’s that nobody wants to hear

Butchers with cold meat pies

And the promise of hot roast beef, pork balms

A greengrocers that looks reassuringly cold

Slightly tattered and worn

No room for high gloss glass mirrors

And tiles

Inside are scoop them

Up scales and brown paper bags

There’s the alternative therapy shop that invites you

To use any of a number of healing ways

Including dreamcatchers cards and crystals

In all of those that are empty of customers

The owners sit staring at their phones

 

The street is its self, alive with the chatty clattered buzz

Of people buggies squalling babies

Naughty children and electric chairs

As they all go about their business

The disbelief at the ATM

‘how much?’

In this the high street

In the long-forgotten town

Where today meets yesterday and back

Slapping its self around the face

With all that it tries to be

And all that it is proudly not

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Martin Elder

Thu 2nd Mar 2017 11:53

Thank you one and all for all of your comments.
This is based on a street that I regularly walk down once a week being a locality in a much bigger borough where I see the same patterns of existence and as you say Paul it has become a familiar pattern throughout many parts of the U.K.
As you say Colin there are certain small towns and villages where the more well to do people have been able to keep alive a number of different local business's In Ditchling I believe they formed a co-operative in order to keep the local grocers open.

David I am glad that you picked up where the piece was going, strangely when I started it that was not my intention but that's the way it ended up. It is the dichotomy between the old and familiar and the garish and modern, not that have anything against the modern. What struck me the most about this particular street in a low income area was that it was alive, not just the shops, the cafes (one or two of which are community cafes) but the people out on the street, going in and out of the shops including the old lady who looked somewhat confused every week when she had her hair done.
I agree with you about the mistaken pride.

Thanks Stu and Raj for your comments, I think that which captured me most was the fact this is a living breathing place, full of colour and texture.
Stu I totally agree with you about those videos, I can feel like those people walking down that street sometimes. 'Unfinished symphony' has got to be one of my favourites.
Thanks again guys, I am honoured by your comments

Martin

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Raj Ferds

Tue 28th Feb 2017 16:53

I enjoyed this piece Martin. Like the way you've captured all the detail. I felt I was walking down that street, taking in all the sights, sounds, the people and places. A colourful tapestry.

I like the last few lines most of all -- the dichotomy of its identity.

Raj

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Paul Waring

Tue 28th Feb 2017 12:40

Martin, what a journey you've taken us on here and what a great story you've told...and how accurately you've portrayed many places in modern Britain. I feel a bit sad now, especially as I'm moving back to the UK next week!

Paul

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Tue 28th Feb 2017 08:15

a microcosm of what we have become - somewhat obsolete - there because we and it have always been there it seems. But that's a bit depressing. Like mankind. Yuk.

But there are some exceptions if you can afford to live in wealthy areas. I can think of a number of small towns / large villages in Sussex which are thriving - butchers, artisan bakers, florists, cafés, pubs, high end charity shops and crafts.

your excellent poem Martin has me pondering on town planning again. Cheers, Col

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Stu Buck

Tue 28th Feb 2017 08:09

brilliant martin, i am right there walking along the street. reminded me a lot of the video for massive attacks 'unfinished symphony' or the verves 'bittersweet symphony', so much going on in just one area of space and time. lovely descriptive prose as ever.

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