Dawn
The sunlight strays through soaring trees,
And birds call out their lonely pleas
That echo strangely in the dawn,
Now that the gloom of night has gone,
And leaves are stirred by morning breeze.
The silent watcher stands and sees
Their careful flights, in twos and threes,
From branch to branch their path is drawn
Through soaring trees.
Another day’s uncertainties,
Avoiding all their enemies,
To seek the bugs they prey upon,
And safely feed their young thereon;
Back to the nest and families
Through soaring trees.
Trevor Alexander
Wed 1st Mar 2017 18:58
Thank you. I actually do like rondeau, along with villanelle, it's one of my favourite rhyming forms. But you're right, they can seem forced if not done well. When I originally wrote this a couple of weeks ago, I wasn't sure about it. But re-reading it today I kinda liked it, so decided to put it up here.